Drawing on one of the strategies for writing introductions outlined in your text

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Drawing on one of the strategies for writing introductions outlined in your text or the lesson, post a draft of your introductory paragraph(s) as your first post. Then, throughout the week, reply to your classmates with feedback on their introductory paragraphs. Note how or why an introduction caught your attention and explain what impression it gives you about the essay’s larger purpose. Also explain how your classmate’s voice, tone, or diction contributes to the overall effectiveness of the introduction.

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Explanation / Answer

Self-Introduction outline and reviews

It is vital to present yourself since it demonstrates your capacity to meet new individuals unquestionably. It influences others to feel greater and enables you to establish a decent first connection. So, in accordance with the importance of self-introduction, I have some specific strategy to cater to one’s personality. I’ll be analyzing a person with the mindset of some below-mentioned queries:-

Which story embraces the truest image of one’s life and how did he/she respond to it? What are the ambitions or goals? Leisure time activities and favorites? What are aversions? What special skill they have and how do they use that skill? If they are asked to have some milestone in their life, what it would be? What do they like to discuss, the most? Their native land and relation of their personality and nature to their land of origin? Their distinguishing feature from others?

Feedback on the introductory paragraphs of classmates:-

I have encountered so many different intros from my crew, they introduced their self really well by just telling what are their goals, their protocol to achieve those goals, what are they fond of or what they dislike the most and why etc. it’s easy to build a good relation with a person whom you really well.

But, the most important of all, one of my classmate came up with totally different locution, I was surprised to hear that bit shaky voice stating of what he fears about, the most. This was a way different approach to me to introduce one's self. Not only did he mention about his fears, but also how he overcomes it.

It was worth noticing!

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