( L.O. 2 ) Your Task Revise the following sentences to eliminate trite business

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(L.O. 2)

Your Task Revise the following sentences to eliminate trite business phrases.

As per your request, we will no longer send you e-mail offers.

Thank you in advance for considering our plea for community support.

(L.O. 2)

Your Task Revise the following sentences to avoid confusing clichés, slang, buzzwords, and wordiness.

Although our last presentation bombed, we think that beyond the shadow of a doubt our new presentation will fly.

Our team must be willing to think outside the box in coming up with marketing ideas that pop.

(L.O. 2)

Your Task Revise the following to recover buried verbs.

Ms. Rivera gave an official appraisal of the home's value.

Web-based customer service certainly causes a reduction in overall costs.

As per your request, we will no longer be sending you offers in your mail address.

Thank you in advance for considering our request for community support.

Although our last presentation did not work out, we think that beyond the shadow of a doubt our new presentation will be successful.

Our team must be willing to think outside the box in coming up with marketing ideas that are unique and different.

Ms. Rivera offered appraisal of the home's value.

Web-based customer service cause a reduction in overall costs.

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