Does my cover letter sound good? Any errors I should fix? Dear Ms. Levison: I am

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Does my cover letter sound good? Any errors I should fix?

Dear Ms. Levison:

I am writing to express my interest in the marketing Internship advertised as being open at this time with Eluvial Enterprise Inc. I came across the job description on Indeed.com, and was delighted to find that my academic accomplishments and experience meet all of the necessary requirements.

According to your advertisement, the job includes “updating company website to improve appearance and traffic and managing social media sites to promote company activities and products.” A recent internship with CoreSphere, LLC introduced me to many tasks. I promoted products through electronic media such as internet and social networking. I coordinated marketing campaigns through Instagram and Twitter. Brainstorm new ideas to the internal team and supporting partners.

I am a Business Administration student who will be graduating in May 2018. Although the focus of my studies has been marketing and management. During my college school work I completed a major marketing research project, which given me a great experience in marketing survey and research analysis. Moreover, my experience includes part-time job as an office assistance. This work experience provided me an ability with organizational skills and management.

I enclosed my resume along with this letter. I look forward to the chance to meet you for an interview session. I would be happy to answer questions. You can contact me at 240-622-9524 to arrange an interview. Thank you for your consideration; I look forward to speaking with you soon.

Sincerely,

Sandy Bonilla

Explanation / Answer

First paragraph is Okay.

Under your experience you can mention that ,

I have hands on experience on Social Media Marketing and Promotional activities on famous platforms like Facebook, Twitter, Instagram to name a few. Also I have participated into strategic team of the company to brainstorm on new ideas. I even have experience of Market Research and analysis through conducting surveys with varied sources. I am working as Office Assistant, Part-time, which provides me a good know how about any organization's functions and way of working.

I am currently persuing my Business Administration with Marketing Specialization passing out in 2018. I have enclosedd my resume for your kind reference.

I can be reached on 240-622-9524 for any communication.

Eagerly waiting for your response and speaking with you.

Yours Sincerely,

Sandy Bonilla

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