Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation of the below \"sel

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Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation of the below "self-reflection" paper. English is my second language. Thank you very very much!

Public speaking has always been very hard for me. No matter how many times I’ve done it I’ve always get so nervous and sometimes I felt my whole body was shaking uncontrollably. However, in the last assignment, I felt very comfortable because I knew there will be no audience watching me. I was excited organizing my ideas and thinking I will nail it in the first try. As soon as I turned on my phone camera, all of my anxiety came back and I could feel my legs were shaking. Of course, I failed so many times before I satisfy with the result. Even though videotapes are less stressful than facing actual audience, I’m still unable to control my anxiety. I worried too much about my accent, how I sounds, my volume, postures, so many factors kept distracting me. I lost my train of thought for so many times because my brain was thinking of something else. It took me 6thtime to finally calm myself, organized my thoughts, looked at my draft one last time, took a deep breath and finally able to finished my speech as smooth as I wanted it to be. My conclusion about my speech is, I need to focus on one thing and stop worrying about thousands other factors. I need to stay calm because I tend to mumble when I start getting nervous. I need to stop worrying too much about my accent and speak louder. I learned one thing from Professor Bob that I never forget. He said for English Second Language Learner, we tend to speak quietly so nobody catches our mistake. But by doing that we start to mumble and our audience will not be able to hear us. The only way to fix that is to speak loud and clear in order to deliver the information the most effective.

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Public speaking has been difficult for me.No matter the number of times i always get nervous and my body shakes uncontrollably.

I could feel my legs trembling

I failed number of times before i was satisfied with my perfomance

Iam worried about my accent

I lost my thought many times as my brain was distracted

it took me six times to organize myself

I need to focus on onething rather worry about too many factors

I learned one thing from proffessor BOB that i will never forget

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