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Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation Passive:17 Aggress

ID: 3453516 • Letter: P

Question

Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation

Passive:17

Aggressive: 11

Assertive: 16

I scored highest on passive, which is true half of the time. I always try to avoid conflict at all cause, I don’t like to argue with other people especially when we’re both angry. Sometimes, I found myself trying to explain what’s right and wrong when I’m certain on a situation. I also like to please everyone around me, I know it’s impossible to always make everyone happy, but that’s doesn’t stop me from trying.

I can be aggressive in a certain situation. When I feel like my solutions or ideas are right, I would like people to listen to me. I can be a little harsh and bossy to get the attention.

My score on assertive is 16, which is very close to passive. I’m usually extra careful with what I say to people. I’m very straight forward, but I will say it in the way that don’t hurt others.

Explanation / Answer

Some mistakes that I noticed.

Do not use short forms such as what's

I always try to avoid conflict by all means. When we are both angry. Sometimes I find myself - what is right. I also like to make people around me happy. But that doesn't stops me from trying

I can be aggressive in cretain situation.

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