Parallel Structure Revision Worksheet. i need to know if i rewrote them correctl

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Parallel Structure Revision Worksheet.

i need to know if i rewrote them correctly.

1.)Jennifer is gracious, ambitious, and has intelligence.

Jennifer is gracious, ambitious, and intelligent.

2.) Air pollution poses a problem both in the city and country.

Air pollution poses a problem in the city and country.

3.) A modern physician in a small town not only is proficient in general medicine but surgery as well.

A modern physician in a small town is proficient in general medicine and surgery.

4.) Esther is a helpful person and who makes friends easily.

Esther makes friends easily and is a helpful person.

5.) Yosemite has spectacular scenery and which has half-tame bears.

Yosemite has a spectacular scenery and half-tame bears.

6.) I would prefer to fix an old car than watching television.

I would prefer to fix an old car than to watch television.

7.) The nursery was cheerful and had a lot of sun.

The nursery was cheerful and bright.

8.) The dog had to choose between jumping over the fence or he could have dug a hole underneath it.

The dog had to choose between jumping over the fence or digging a hole underneath it.

9.) That night the prisoner was sick, discouraged, and she was filled with loneliness.

That night prisoner was sick, discouraged, and felt lonely.

10.) He was determined to pass the math course, not only to earn his three credits, but also for a sense of achievement.

He was determined to pass the math course, to earn his three credits and for a sense of achievement.

9. That night when prisoner was sick and discouraged she felt lonely

10. He was determined to pass the math course to earn his three credits and sense of achievement.

Rest all are correctly written.

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