English is my second laguage. Please help check my grammar, sentence structure,
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English is my second laguage. Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation, topic sentences. Please check carefully, this is my project. Thank you very much!
My highest score is identity. Every person has their own unique identity, I understand that my background, my family, where I grew up play a huge part in shaping my identity. All of my experiences, the impact that life throw at me made the person I am today. I clearly understand my values, what I can bring to the world. I know that my service to others is like a grit in a dessert, but I believe it helps to change a part of the world.
Dependable strengths reflect.
Learner
I can never imagine one day, I will stop from learning new things. In this nonstop growing world, I will be so behind on everything if I don’t gain more knowledge. I feel good sitting in a group of people, and I can always give inputs, ideas and actually understand what other people saying.
Since I was little, I always want to know how things work. I started by asking a lot of questions and that annoyed people sometimes. Once I curious about something, I did research to find the answer. I get really frustrated when I can’t find the exact answer that I want. I feel the need of gaining more knowledge will help me in one way or the others.
In the work environment, I look for a company with a lot of opportunity where I can master one thing and I move on to learn another. I don’t like it when I have to do one thing over and over again. I feel like that’s a waste of time and I can use that time to learn more and more.
In my education career, I always try to take few different classes to have a little understand of different fields and majors. I like to have a broad understanding of any subjects. I carefully pick one that I have the most interest and concentrate on developing that interest.
Responsibility
I hate the feeling when I disappointing other people. I also don’t like it when people expect a lot from me and I can’t quite satisfy their expectation. And because of that I can hardly say no to people. I feel like if anyone know me, they know that whenever they ask me to do something for them, I will always say yes. That’s also a reason why people keep coming back to me for help.
Throughout my education career, my classmates love to have me as their group member. I always a backup person when someone forget to do their part, or they have something came up and ask me to help them. Because it’s a group project, and it will eventually effect myself as well as others group member. I feel that it is my responsibility to complete the project.
Every single one of my words count, when I can say it, I can do it. Sometimes it gets me in trouble because I accidently promise something I can’t even do it. In those situations, I feel extremely guilty for not completing it.
I constantly worrying about any deadlines, I can’t hang out with my friends or enjoy some other thing without completing my tasks first. I always have to finish all the assignments that professors assign to me before I can have a good night sleep. In general, I can’t walk away from something without completing it.
Strategic
I always love to be a part of decision making process. I constantly absorbing and analyzing information. Sometimes I got questioned for making quick decision, people think I don’t spend much time thinking things through, but in reality, ideas come to me really fast. I’ll able to come up with a solution to any problems after knowing the situation. Along the way working toward the result, if I think of another quick way to reach the result faster, I will change my method right away.
With that being said, I’m a little frustrated when I have to wait for people making slow decision or connections. I think because of that I can’t train or teach people very well, because I don’t have a lot of patient waiting for people to understand all the process. I started to get really frustrated when people asking me the same question three times. I sometimes do things by myself because I have a feeling waiting for other’s input is a little bothersome. Also, when people came to me for help, but sometimes I give them the answer too quick, so they don’t take it too serious.
Kind
I believe kindness is the key to connect everyone together. It is the most important human characteristics. It shortens the gap between two people. It is something so easy to do, yet so hard to actually doing it.
When I first moved here, I didn’t speak any English at all, my life turns upside down and I thought I can’t ever go to school anymore. But I’m so lucky to have a lot of people on my sides. Push me and help me to overcome my fear. Now when I thought about it I want to become a person always be there when my friends, my families need me. Because I understand the feeling of being scare and alone. I want people to understand that no matter what happen, I will be there and help them. I’ve been bullied and I understand the struggle, the feeling of being reject from a group of friend. So, whenever I see someone bullied by others. I know that they will need someone to stand up for them and show them that they worth it. If everyone be kind to one another, I can imagine this world will be much better place to live.
Everything I do, I always put myself in other people place so I understand their feeling their thought. I treat people the way I want to be treated.
Explanation / Answer
Identity
Every person has their own unique identity and I understand that my background, my family, where I grew up, played a major role in shaping my identity. All my experiences and the impact of those experiences made the person, I am today. I clearly understand my values that I could bring to the world. I know that my service to others, is like a grit in a desert but I believe that it helps in causing a small change in the world.
Dependable strengths
Learner
I can never imagine that one day I will stop learning new things. In this ever growing world, I will be far behind from everything, if I don’t gain enough knowledge on things concerned to me. I always feel good, sitting with a group of people. I share my inputs, ideas and listen and understand what other people say.
I always wanted to know how things work from my childhood. I started asking a lot of questions that annoyed people at times. Once I was curious about something and I started to search for the answer. I got really frustrated, when I couldn’t find the exact answer that I wanted. I felt that gaining more knowledge will help me in one way or the other.
I searched for a company with a lot of opportunity to master one thing and move on to learn the next because I don’t like to do the same thing over and over again. I feel that it would be a waste of time doing something repeatedly and I could use that time to learn many new things.
In my academic life, I always take few different classes to understand different fields and majors. I like to understand any subject broadly. I carefully pick the ones that I am interested in and focusing on developing it.
Responsible
Although I hate disappointing other people, I also don’t like it when people expect a lot from me because I can’t satisfy their expectation all the time. The trickiest part is that I hardly say no to people. People who know me always ask me to do something for them because they know that I will always say yes. That’s also a reason why people keep coming back to me for help.
Throughout my academic life, my classmates loved to have me as their group member. I was always a back-up person when someone forgot to do their part. I feel that it is my responsibility to complete the project because it’s a group project and it would eventually effect myself as well as others group members.
My every single word counts because when I say it, I can do it. Sometimes, it gets me in trouble because I accidently promise something which I can’t even do it. In those situations, I feel extremely guilty for accepting something which I can’t complete, knowingly.
I constantly worry about the deadlines because I won’t be able to hang out with my friends or enjoy anything else without completing my tasks first. I always complete all the assignments that professors assign to me before I can have a good night’s sleep. In general, I can’t walk away from something without completing it.
Strategic
I love to be part of the decision making process. I constantly absorb and analyze information. Sometimes, I am questioned for making quick decisions because people think I don’t spend much time thinking things through, but in reality, ideas come to me really fast. I’ll be able to come up with a solution to any problem once I’m in the situation. During the course of action, I will change my method immediately, if I think of another quick way to reach the result faster.
With that being said, I become frustrated, when I have to wait for people making slow decision or connections because I think that slows down my actions. I don’t have the patience to wait for people to understand all the process, while I train them. I started to get really frustrated when people ask me the same question repeatedly. I sometimes do things by myself because I feel that waiting for other’s input delays my process. When people come to me for help, I give them the answer too quickly, so that they don’t take it seriously.
Kindness
I believe that kindness is the key to connect everyone together and it is the most important human characteristics. It bridges the gap between people. It is easy to say, yet very hard to practice.
When I first moved here, I couldn’t speak English at all and my life seemed to have turned upside down and I thought I won’t be able to go to school but I’m so lucky to have a lot of people on my side to help me. They push me and help me overcome my fear.
I want to become a person, to be there when my friends and family need me because I understand that it’s very scary to be alone. I want people to understand that no matter what happens, I will be there to help them. I’ve been bullied and I understand the struggle and the feeling of being rejected by friends. So, whenever I see someone is bullied by others, they need someone to stand up for them and strengthen them to overcome all those silly experiences. If everyone is kind to one another, this world will become a better place to live.
Whatever I do, I always put myself in other people’s place, so that I could understand their feelings and thoughts. I have started to treat people in the same way I want them to treat me.
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