Anyone can help me for these question please with typing around 250 words, need

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Anyone can help me for these question please with typing around 250 words, need is asap!!!

Write a long sentence (40-50) words about a company or person you admire. Then revise the sentence so that it contains 10 words or fewer. Finally, rewrite the sentence so that it contains 16-22 words. Which sentence do you think is most effective? Why? Don't fall into the Goldilocks trap--the medium length sentence is not always the one that is just right. (Answer these questions about your own sentences, and then respond to your classmates posts. Also, try to make each sentence interesting...don't just add more words to make it longer. Really think about the art & craft of writing a sentence!).

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40-50 words

Have you ever felt an air of richness or intellect and another level of sophistication around a person? Their diction, poise, style of speaking, their composure and body language, the way they carry themselves? Well, my school Principal is such a woman, truly admirable and original, always spreading around sunshine like confetti.

10 words

My principal can spread around sunshine like confetti.

16-22 words

With everything that she does, she always leaves one wondering, almost as if there is magic in her. Her perfection is admirable.

I think, for me the longest sentence will be the most appropriate. This would be so because you are talking about a person/company you really admire. To explain why you admire something or someone, you need to be able to express yourself. You need to be able to use enough words so as to put across your ideas clearly. Although 16-22 seems reasonable, it would have been a better choice if you just had to describe a person/company. Here you are talking about them as if you admire them, and that would require more words according to me.

Thus, the sentence with 40-50 words would be the most effective in this case.

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