Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation, topic sentences.

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Please help check my grammar, sentence structure, punctuation, topic sentences. Please add more, If you have other ideas about bright and dark side of each strengths. Thank you very much!

Strategic

Bright side

I love being a part of decision making process. I’m able to break down a complex problem to a simple one. I can quickly think of different solutions and pick the one works best. If you give me any problems, I will quickly give you a simplest solution.

Dark side

I become frustrated, when I have to wait for people making a slow decision or connections because I think that slows down my progress. I also don’t like it when people ask me the same question too many times, I guess I’m just don’t like explain things. I sometimes do things by myself because I feel that waiting for other’s input delays my process

I think to fix this, I will have to be more patience, because I don’t want to lose my follower. Also, I have to think not everyone is the same. We all have different way to solve things, different approach to certain problem, different knowledge. Sometimes it’s good to work alone, but most of the time “two brains are better than one” so try to talk to other people, they might even have better ideas.

Learner

Bright side

I love to learn, I often ask a lot of question if I curious about something. I can also do my own research if I want to understand any subject better. I can’t do one thing repeatedly, after I’ve master one thing, I like to move on and learn other things. I took several classes from different major and I realize I have a lot other interest besides my major.

Dark side

Sometimes, learner assumes they know everything and not open for other ideas. Also, they don’t focus on one area alone.

Restorative

Bright side

I love to solve problem, I love to fix things, it’s annoyed me when people easily let go from something difficult. I also use strategic strength in order to solve difficult situation too. Usually people will come to me when they need help to solve a problem. I enjoy the challenge of analyzing the symptoms

Dark side

Sometimes, I won’t be able to let go from certain situation. I always have to solve the problem in order to move on, but in reality, not everything, every problem can be fix. Also, sometimes I’m too fast to give a solution, I won’t allow other people to solve their own problems, and they start to depends on me

Ideation

Bright side

I can come up with new ideas, and I just love to discover new ideas and innovation. I like to think of. I can always come up with hundreds of new ideas in my head.

Dark side

Like I said above, I can think of hundreds of ideas, but if I don’t write it down, I will forget them right away, and won’t be able to act. So sometimes I only think but I don’t actually act. People often have a hard time understand my own ideas, because I can’t express what I want 100%. I have hard time explain my ideas to people, so it’s hard for people to follow.

Relator

Bright side

I care more about quality than quantity, I only have a few friends, and we’re really close, we understand each other goals, dream, we motivate each other to reach our goal. Once I’m close to someone, I will do whatever it takes to help them, I’m all about authenticity. I usually spend time with family and close friends

Dark side

Sometimes, I feel uncomfortable talking to strangers, I stick to same friends group all the time, and because of that I don’t have a good network.

Explanation / Answer

I've corrected the gammer and added few words in the same writeup.

Bright side

I love being a part of decision making process. I’m able to break down a complex problem to a simple one. I can quickly think of different solutions and pick the one which works best. If you give me any problem, I will quickly give you the simplest solution.

Dark side

I become frustrated, when I have to wait for people making a slow decision or connections because I think that slows down my progress. I also don’t like it when people ask me the same question too many times, I guess I just don’t like to explain things. I sometimes do things by myself because I feel that waiting for other’s input delays my process.

I think, to fix this, I will have to be more patient, because I don’t want to lose my followers. Also, I have to think that no one is the same. We all have different way to solve things, different approach to certain problem, different knowledge. Sometimes it’s good to work alone, but most of the time “two brains are better than one” , So I try talking to the other people, they might even have better ideas.

Learner

Bright side

I love to learn, I often ask a lot of questions if I am curious about something. I can also do my own research if I want to understand any subject in a better way. I can’t do one thing repeatedly, after I’ve master one thing, I like to move on and learn other things. I took several classes from different majors and I realize I have a great interest in other things besides my major.

Dark side

Sometimes, learner assumes they know everything and they are not open for any other ideas. Also, they don’t only focus on one area.

Restorative

Bright side

I love to solve problems, I love to fixing things, it’s annoying to me when people easily let go from something difficult. I also use strategic strength in order to solve difficult situations too. Usually people will come to me when they need help to solve a problem. I enjoy the challenge of analyzing the symptoms and overcoming the problem.

Dark side

Sometimes, I won’t be able to let go a certain situation. I always have to solve the problem in order to move on, but in reality, not everything, every problem can be fixed. Also, sometimes I’m too fast to give a solution, I won’t allow other people to solve their own problems, and they start depending on me.

Ideation

Bright side

I can come up with new ideas, and I just love to discover new ideas and innovations that I like to think of. I can always come up with hundreds of new ideas in my head.

Dark side

Like I said above, I can think of hundreds of ideas, but if I don’t write it down, I will forget them right away, and won’t be able to act. So sometimes I only think but I don’t actually act. People often have a hard time understanding my own ideas, because I can’t express what I want at the full level. I have hard time explaining my ideas to people, so it’s hard for people to follow.

Relator

Bright side

I care more about quality than quantity, I only have a few friends, and we’re really close, we understand each other's goals, dreams, we motivate each other to reach our goal. Once I’m close to someone, I will do whatever it takes to help them, I’m all about authenticity. I usually spend time with family and close friends

Dark side

Sometimes, I feel uncomfortable talking to strangers, I stick to same friends group all the time, and because of that I don’t have a good network.

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