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G IMPROVEMENT EXERCISES Audience Benefits and the \"You\" View Revise the follow

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G IMPROVEMENT EXERCISES Audience Benefits and the "You" View Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the "you" view. 1. To help us process your order with our new database software, we need you to go to our 2. Under a new policy, reimbursement of travel expenses will be restricted to those related 3. To avoid suffering the kinds of monetary losses experienced in the past, our credit union 4. We are pleased to announce an arrangement with HP that allows us to offer discounted 5. We are pleased to announce that you have been approved to enroll in our management 6. Our warranty goes into effect only when we have received the product's registration card Web site and fill out the customer information required. to work only. now prohibits the cashing of double-endorsed checks presented by our customers. computers in the student bookstore trainee program. from the purchaser. LIofortunately, the computer and telephone systems will be down Thursday afternoon fo upgrades to improve both systems. effort to be friendly to the environment, we are asking all employe consumption by communicating by e-mail and avoiding printing 8. As part of our company acng by e-mail and aviding printing

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Answer:

• To help us process your order with our new database software, we need you to go to our website and fill out the customer information required.

To effectively process your order, please fill the customer details needed in our website.

• To avoid suffering the kinds of monetary losses experienced in the past, our credit union now prohibits the cashing of double-endorsed checks presented by our customers.

Our credit union have decided to not cashing the double endorsed check to avoid any monetary loss similar to past experiences.

• Our warranty goes into effect only when we have,We have prepared the enclosed form that may be used by victims to report identity theft to creditors.

The security of your finance is most important.in order to report identity theft,please use form that is enclosed.

• Unfortunately, the computer and telephone systems will be down Thursday afternoon when we will be installing upgrades to improve both systems.

To provide better services, computer and telephones system will be upgrade for improvement on Thursday.

• As part of our company effort to be friendly to the environment, we are asking all employees to reduce paper consumption by communicating by e-mail and avoiding printing.

All employees of company should use email and avoide printing in order to reduce pape