I am curious if these statements are correct the statement in bold is original.

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I am curious if these statements are correct the statement in bold is original. (I know this is not psychology but there is no English)

Edit to unstack modifying nouns or to rearrange work order for coherence and emphasis

I recommend these management performance improvement incentives.

I recommend these incentives for management performance improvement.

Our profits have doubles since we automated our assembly line.

Since we automated our assembly line our sales have doubled.

In all writing, revision is required.

Revision is required in all writing.

Sarah’s job involves fault analysis systems troubleshooting handbook preparation.

Sarah’s job involves a preparation handbook for fault analysis systems troubleshooting.

I recommend these incentives for management performance improvement.

Our profits have doubled since we automated our assembly line.

Revisions are required in all writing.

Sarah's job involves a handbook preparation for fault analysis systems troubleshooting.

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