Read and revise sentences (a) through (e), each dealing with various business is

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Question

Read and revise sentences (a) through (e), each dealing with various business issues. Please see these sentences

Assignment (Your Task): Revise the sentences shown in exercise 4.4 to eliminate gender, racial, ethnic, age, and disability bias.

Format:

1. Re-write each entire sentence, and underline the words that you changed in your new sentences.

2. Please label your sentences the same as those in the textbook (a., b., c.,.....)

3. Below your revised sentence, write the original sentence as shown in the textbook, with the font in italics, and label this sentence: "Original").

The sentences :

A. Every employee must wear his photo identification on the job.

B.The conference will offer special excursions for the wives of executives.

C. Does each salesman have his own smartphone loaded with his special sales information?

D. A policeman is responsible for covering his territory.

E. Serving on the panel are a lady veterinarian, an Indian CPA, two businessmen, and a female doctor.

A. Every employee must wear their photo identification on the job.

Original: Every employee must wear his photo identification on the job.

B. The conference will offer special excursions for the spouses of executives.

Original: The conference will offer special excursions for the wives of executives.

C. Does each sales representative have their Smartphone loaded with their special sales information?

Original: Does each salesman have his own Smartphone loaded with his special sales information?

D. A police officer is responsible for covering his or her territory.

Original: A policeman is responsible for covering his territory.

E. Serving on the panel are a veterinarian, a CPA, two business people, and a doctor.

Original: Serving on the panel are a lady veterinarian, an Indian CPA, two businessmen, and a female doctor.

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